Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Writing Practice

I am going to do "Once there was a snowman" in different styles. REGULAR Once there was a snowman, snowman, snowman, once there was a snowman...tall, tall, tall...In the sun he melted, melted, melted. In the sun he melted, small, small, small.

FLOWERY
One warm day there was a crystal white snowman, yes a snow white man who had been built magnificently tall, so tall, oh tall. And then when the sun was beating down upon the poor white man he melted, melted, that poor white man he melted...small, oh small, so small.

ABSTRACT
The big burning ball rises once more in the fashion that is designed, but today looks down upon a pillar of white, strong, sturdy, tall, tall, so tall. Its heat directly penetrates the pillars inner makeup and the white liquefies small, small, so small.

DEPRESSED
Another day drags on opening every ones eyes with its penetrating gaze and a snow white man on his own stands tall, tall, tall. The merciless red ball burns endlessly crushing everything in its path the snow white man he stands no chance, but vanishes...small, small, small.

POSITIVE
This really beautiful day came and the sun shone warm and bright! This old dirty snowman that stood so tall, tall, tall...FINALLY has started to turn to a beautiful glistening puddle to water all the blooming flowers, he melts, small, small, small!

EVERYDAY TALK-girl generalization
LIKE, once there was this snowman, outside and LIKE it was SOOO tall, oh my heck it was tall, fricken tall. And then LIKE the sun came out and LIKE it started to melt, and it LIKE got small, really small, fricken small!

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